Computers are increasingly used in education in which area do you think are computers more important and in which area teachers are more important.
There are split opinion regarding,in today's education system computer are widely use.Some believes that in some specific field computers are essential.While another group of thinkers support that teacher are more significant in academic area rather than computers. However, both has its own pros and cons.Therefor, before commenting on my decision both the inclination would be discussed.
On the face of statement, there are multiple factors to support technical equipment, such as computer which is utilising by different area.The formost reason of education area,the utility of computer are increasing by student, because learner can do research by using online resources in computer.Also pupils learn skill which are useful for their future. Another factor that attracts is that in information technology Sector computer are more significant.Thereason is that IT sector is a business sector that deals with computing including software communication through computer,gathering worlds information by utilisation of computers.
On the other hand,the latter view suggest that teacher are also played the role in many areas,like in school, tuition,classes and many more.Generally teachers are played their wide role in education system and educator's are pioneer of the study.Beside, this tutor are give basic information of study from low level to high level and this guidance not only for study but also provides life lessons for bright future of pupils.Also they can contribute positively to society.Teacher have power to make junior capable and Strengthful for their after life of academy.
To summarise and gives my opinion,I would say that in modern word technological device and teachers are both appropriate in their area. While this two things are corresponding with each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72388059701 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26241481301 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638059701493 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 158.77875764 49.4020404114 321% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 219.142857143 106.682146367 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.2857142857 20.7667163134 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306538480913 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120023370182 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114504353536 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163524481575 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106995471335 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.7 13.0946893788 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 15.99 50.2224549098 32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.49 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.94 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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