some people think that using animals for experimentation purpose is cruel but other people think that is necessary for the development of science discuss both views and give your opinion
Existence of every creature has its own importance it is believed that for research method use of animals is considering harsh activity. However, other believe that it is a required for certain experiments in laboratory in my opinion it is a more convenient to use animal rather than human for clinical samples.
One the one hand, there are some points in which way we can say that it is heartless activity to use animals for scientific research. Initially, all the creatures are priceless gift which is created by god. Only because of we humans are more stronger compared to other animals we don't have rights to use them for our needs. In laboratory advanced machine and dangerous chemicals damage skin and body. Some of the creatures are useful for human being for instance in one of the survey famous scientist Albert Einstein give the theory of bees, in which he said that if all this will die in in the world then you dies prejudicial effects on human being will be seen that up data after four years they will they all will die. As a result, use of animals for research is a cruel response.
On the other hand, science research is now in another level, in which many methods are very helpful for us.In the field of medical science, production of new machines which are impactful for various dangerous disease like cancer, needed some research and real application.However human life is more valuable than animals and also animal's genes and their behaviour are almost similar to us. Hence, it is easy to apply chemical on them and receive appropriate results of experiments.For instance, rates have almost similar DNA reaction of chemicals to human so they are used for experiments.
In conclusion, I reiterate my views that allthought,murder of any creature is crying in our culture,for scientific reasons having usage of animals ,is beneficial rather than human being, because of they are corresponding to us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93558282209 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80150537811 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558282208589 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.105811788 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.272727273 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6363636364 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238523129216 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105628613562 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656734834784 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152479206876 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452449945848 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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