Some people think that government should Ban dangerous sports. while other think that people should have freedom to do any sports or activities. discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the modernization world, physical activities are the part and parcel of healthy life. Nonetheless, there are some issues which remain unchanged and as Complex as ever. For instance, this topic asserts that should it is important for government to ban dangerous sports; or people have freedom to do any sports or activity? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimension of this topic through examples and assertions and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one hand, there are some people who think that it is a important for government to ban dangerous sports? Broadly speaking, the prominent reason is that it leads towars deaths and serious accidents. It has been seen that nowadays, people take more risks in their precious life to earn more money because these types of sports such as: horse riding, Scuba Diving or Bull riding paid highly amount of money to the people. Similarly, when people do these types of sports they get injuries many people are die in such as accidents. Likewise, it is a huge lose to person families who die in such accidents. The survey conducted by sports club in which they reveal that 70% of people are died by taking participate in these dangerous sports.
On the flip side, group of people who believe that people should have freedom to do any sports or activities. The forest region is that people learn valuable skills. Moreover, it help them to maintain their physical and mental level Meanwhile, people get name and fame and they also improve their standard of living in the society furthermore, they learn team sports, discipline and honesty which are highly beneficial for them. Even though people have less equipment to pursue their level so if government take initiative step and provide proper medical facilities and equipment to the people they easily develop the skills and improve their future life.
Nevertheless, weighing both the options, I tend to believe that they are no single conclusions. still, I take this ground that an effective clap requires the both use of hands, every sport has little or more danger in performing it. It is up to the individual carefully go through all the pros and cons before deciding to participate in such games.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, similarly, so, still, while, broadly speaking, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89839572193 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51244151735 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542780748663 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0366908966 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.764705882 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331015617172 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103804860084 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122187921785 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174956692224 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673520790006 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.