Nowadays many people are diagnosed with insomnia. What are the causes of this? What can be done to improve the situation?
It is undoubtedly the case that people are more diagnosed with Insomnia, which is also affecting the mankind adversely.In this essay, I will examine the possible reason for this phenomena and suggest some of the proactive measures that individual could implement to reduce the problem.
The first step is to understand why it is happening?Broadly speaking there are two main reasons.The first and foremost reason is that people are changing their living lifestyle which lead to make this problem worse because people are more likely to be involved into stress or worries which may also affect on their health.In addition, moreover they also face this serious problem due to late night sleep because people nowdays more likely to be involved in their work,they cannot take proper sleep.One other cause of this could be that people are not maintain their diet well,they have more reliable on junk food rarher than household food.As far as trend is concerned,they are more depend on technology which made their life convenient and due to that reason fever people have been participated in outdoor activities which may also have major problems.
Admittedly,there is no one solution to this problem,given complexity of its causes.This problem could be solved by make genreal public awareness about healthy food,which may help to reduce this problem and they make their health better.It would also be possible to say that people should manitain their lifestyle because "if" they eat food at a proper time and take a proper sleep with in the proper tine frame,this problem will be solved.A best epitome of this a survey conducted by world health organization in which they gave speech that 70% people are started doing outdoor actuvities,which may help them in controlling their problem,they feel better than in the past.
In conclusion, there are variety of different factors which may lead to make this problem worse.while,it may difficult to find a complete solution of this,it could propably be solved by if we take initative and take more partcipate in activitues and eat healthy food ,reduce their stress live happily with positive thoughts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, well, broadly speaking, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16835016835 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82179792059 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552188552189 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 99.0 20.2975951904 488% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 239.758674968 49.4020404114 485% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 511.666666667 106.682146367 480% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 99.0 20.7667163134 477% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.3333333333 7.06120827912 288% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148939730995 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118270533754 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0233393845773 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118270533754 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233393845773 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 52.4 13.0946893788 400% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -29.01 50.2224549098 -58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 41.9 11.3001002004 371% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.89 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.11 8.58950901804 141% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 41.6 10.1190380762 411% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 42.0 10.7795591182 390% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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