Some people think that government should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your opinion
People hold different views about whether the governement should ban extreme sports such as car-racing, boxing, parachuting and so on. While this argument seems reasonable to certain extent, I believe that such prohibition should not be implemented.
On the one hand, there area several reasons to believe that banning of extreme sports is vital and beneficial. Firstly, dangerous sports involve various unforseeable risks which could directly put participant’s life into jeopardy. Parachuting, for instance, is a modern sport that captivates many adventurous youngsters. However, should a player is not equiped with either knowledge about how to use special equipments or problem-solving skills, they might be unable to operate the parachute correctly and timely. This mistake, as a result, poses threats to their lives. Secondly, the prevalance of extreme sports can bring violence into real life. To illustrate, car-racers may possess a proclivity to break traffic rules due to their obsession to high speed, which results in severe accidents.
On the other hand, though being seemingly reasonable, prohibition of dangerous sports is not viable. Individuals should be entitled with right and freedom to take part in any sports and activities they find enjoyable. If someone holds a desire for thrill and adventure then no one is able to deter them from pursuing their passions. Besides, participating in extreme sports can stimulate bravery and hone problem-solving skills, leading to success at work. Players are unconsciously trained and sharpen their skills because they have to make right decision not to endanger their own lives in such tense circumstances. For this reason, those playing risky sports can build up endurance and stamina against stress and thus a boost in productivity.
In conclusion, extreme sports, albeit being dangerous and harmful to players, should not be prohibited and freedom should be given to those who wish to achieve a sense of fulfilment by taking part in these sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49038461538 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98450792553 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650641025641 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.341750661 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0625 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193243311032 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583028862459 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576515091007 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130681224083 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491231583182 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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