some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Extreme sport has been a controversial story of whether it should be maintained or not. While many social members support its prohibition, I think providing citizens with freedom of sport they opt for is more suitable.
On the one hand, a variety of reasons for which dangerous sports have to be banned can be stated. Firstly, extreme vehicle sports need an exorbitant budget to organize, but not many of them have been approved to be the Olympic disciplines. Thus, not maintaining games which are not beneficial for the nation’s sports and even detrimental in terms of economic could be deemed as a reasonable policy of the government. Moreover, sports like bungee jumping or kayaking require a high level of physical strength, making players exert themselves and, therefore, having a high probability of injury. Hence, if the authority imposed an official ban on them, it would be an effective solution to preventing citizens from venturing their physical health on risky pastime.
On the other hand, I believe that extreme sports should be chosen freely when people want to keep fit. Indeed, people playing dangerous sports are not really insecure, safe in the knowledge that before participating, they have taken sensible precautions, like fully equipping themselves with essential sport gears. Such measures, which were proved to contribute to avoid life-threatening conditions, make the policy of banning extreme sports on safety grounds unconvincing. In addition, it is justified that when an injury occurred, the players themselves, not the authority, have to fully take responsibility of their recovery. Therefore, if extreme sport were outlawed, it could be seen as a personal freedom infringement, rather than a strategy to protect citizens’ health.
Briefly, I concur with the view that people should be free to do dangerous sports, provided that they abide by the safety rules.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed that they abide by the safety rules.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus, while, i think, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37333333333 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98774534093 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606666666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5164397843 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219289216608 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810693762839 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599508785405 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154553613139 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499749838161 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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