SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT GOVERNMENTS SHOULD BAN DANGEROUS SPORTS, WHILE OTHERS THINK PEOPLE SHOULD HAVE FREEDOM TO DO ANY SPORTS OR ACTIVITY. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION
Recently,many types of sports are introduced international level.Some people believe that a few sports should be banned in which risk occurs.However,many people think that government should allow all kind of sports activities.Upcoming essay is going to discuss both arguments.
In this modern era, some kind of sports,which are very dangerous to our life, and it should be announced illegal.Many sport games such as martial arts,boxing and water sport,which is very risky,and it might be lead to accidents and death.For instance,according to latest report many athletes died during practice which was very tough for performe on field. In order to tackle this problem, government can provide rules and regulations towards danger games.It will not only controls injuries,but all people also think while taking steps into this kind of sports games.in addition,government also put restrictions for event and scattered awareness to the athletes.
On the other hand, all sports should be supported by government for the international level.Undountedly,all kind of sports have it own benefits and no other sports can take place for other.For instance, martial arts sport teach us be patient, be dedicate,and develop our sharp perspective view.it exponentially stimulates our body and rise our excitement.Furthermore,it is likely to be became health conciuos among the people and prevalent of such kind of sportsmanship.
In conclusion,in my opinion some highly risky sport not organised like mountain sports which is very dangerous.But , that doesn’t mean that all sports are bad.Govrnment provide policies for controlling more injuries.Government also support those sports more popular among the people.
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also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
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No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.765625 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.75785651186 2.80592935109 134% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62890625 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
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Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
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What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.155598986247 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10406821512 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21523644081 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750949967191 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.1 13.0946893788 207% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.39 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 11.3001002004 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.07 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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