The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with parental skills.
To what extent you agree or disagree?
It is public concern that the number of young people committing offenses is significantly increasing. Some individuals believe that teaching their parents with parental skills is the best method to mitigate juvenile offenses, I completely agree with this view.
There are several reasons why educating parents is important nowadays. The first reason is that adults would work many hours on a daily basis to make money to cover the monthly costs. As a result, they do not have enough time to take care of their children as well as taking part in kid educational classes. Therefore, they even could not understand their offspring’s personality and have harmful behaviors such as being angry with them. This could lead to build bad habits at the early stage of young people one of which is bullying their friends. Other evidence is that many kids participate in unlawful acts such as shoplifting in stores to own things that
they really love because their parents do not know that they lack money.
Moreover, kids tend to imitate the other’s activities while parents usually play and talk to them. If adults are instructed how to communicate and treat properly, their children would copy these things and gradually become well-mannered citizens in society. For example, Trang Moon is a well-known mother in my nation because she spends three years caring for her kids, reading moral books for them, and teaching them how to be a polite person. Finally, her kids are greatly intelligent and show respect to others.
In conclusion, as the reasons mentioned above, I would argue that the best solution would be to minimize youth offenses is to teach their parents with parental skills.
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...ach their parents with parental skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06093189964 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57978380687 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63082437276 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1325933364 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.615384615 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240072528532 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825522530586 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996873637891 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155411192092 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879403074844 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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