TOPIC: The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with parental skills. To what extent you agree or disagree?
It is believed that the most effective way to restrict the number of youngsters committing crimes is to make their parents enroll on courses about parental skills. From my perspective, while forcing parents learning how to educate their children, there should be a combination of different methods to get better results.
It is no doubt about the influence of parents with children’s perception and behavior as parents are the ones who children spend most of their time with as well as children tend to imitate their parents’ actions. Therefore, if parents have negative attitude, they may drive their children to many substandard lifestyles. There have been many cases of children who were pampered by their family then contribute to many social crimes. Or there were also many children who live in broken families that lead to the practice of violence.
However, we should not single out parents as the only ones who effect juveniles. Schools and environment also play important roles. It is proved that children who have chances to go to school and live in a well-being neighborhood made up less percentage of youth crimes than others. It is clear that the responsibility of solving the problems also lays on the efforts that government made to make the social better. To be specific, it may work to push more educational programs about crime prevention in youth at school. Moreover, public security systems should also be improved to ensure that all children have the best environment to live in.
In conclusion, the best solution to reduce young offenders is the balanced combination of parents, schools and good habitants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00373134328 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63502326888 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55223880597 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 268.0 20.2975951904 1320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1341.0 106.682146367 1257% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 268.0 20.7667163134 1291% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 108.0 7.06120827912 1529% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270657386012 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.270657386012 0.084324248473 321% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174400796464 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591205098462 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 136.1 13.0946893788 1039% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -200.54 50.2224549098 -399% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 107.8 11.3001002004 954% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.2 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.76 8.58950901804 242% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 52.0 9.78957915832 531% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 109.2 10.1190380762 1079% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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