Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have the freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many people think that authorities should ban extreme sports. Overall, I believe that people’s freedom of choice should be respected, and they can be involved in any kind of activity, as long as they understand the risks and consequences of their behavior.
The main argument in forbidding extreme sports comes from the fact that those activities are highly dangerous, and participants are exposed to many deadly scenarios. Accidents involving parachutes failed to open on jump or other technical problems happen every year, although the skydiving site’s manager claimed that supplies maintenance is conducted every week. However, people who luckily survived the accident can hardly do anything about the situation. Another argument is dealing with the aftermath form those accidents. Most skydiving businesses made participants sign contracts that relieve them from any responsibility if something goes wrong. In order to file a lawsuit against the skydiving company, plaintiff needs to be able to prove that the accident was a result of the company's action, which is something that is difficult and requires a lot of money and effort. Therefore, by banning life-threatening sports, the number of tragic accidents can be reduced.
In contrast, from a thrill-seeker point of view, skydiving or bungee-jumping and other dangerous sports is a way for players to express themselves. These people find danger heart-throbbing and exciting. Putting life on the line made extreme sports players feel surreal and it also work as an escape from the normal, boring, repetitive life. Not only extreme sports are hobbies, but they have also developed into a major market, offering so many job opportunities. For instance, car-racing or mountain-biking are among the most popular sports with millions of people currently working in the industry. Their championships attract players from all around the globe and the prizes can come up to millions of dollars. The benefits that these sports bring are undeniable and completely banning extreme sports would cause a big loss for the economy.
In conclusion, though dangerous sports indeed come with many risks, I think it is unnecessary for governments to ban them. Instead, the authority should create tighter guidelines for business providers and players to prevent pitiful accidents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48333333333 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96324709286 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602777777778 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5619236741 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260998559093 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077620756632 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693130708581 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16092248284 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548348926212 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.