A lot of people are sympathizers of free healthcare for all,however some other people believe that healthcare facilities should be paid for by individual. This essay would discuss both views.
First of all,every citizen of a country has a right to good healthcare as this one of the government's fiduciary responsibilities to its citizens. A government who fails to provide it's citizens with an access to good healthcare has denied them some of their fundamental rights as citizens of such country. The government owes it citizens certain duties such as basic social amenities and healthcare is by far one of the most important social amenities.
On the other hand,people who are of the opinion that individuals should pay for their access to healthcare facilities are not totally clueless. This is because health they say is wealth and ones health should not be compromised for any reason. In order to ensure that one gets the best in terms of quality then the facilities must be paid for. If the service is paid for then the individual would be rest assured that he would get the best service.
In conclusion,I believe healthcare should be subsidized by the government.This type of arrangement sees to it that both government and its citizens jointly fund healthcare.This would ensure that individuals get affordable healthcare services without compromising on quality.
- Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do u support it or not? (Agree/Disagree) 84
- Leaders of all kinds are often younger than in the past What are the reasons for this development Is this a positive or negative development 40
- Some people think healthcare should be made free for all people, while others believe people should pay for healthcare by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 79
- Technology and relationships 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , however
... sympathizers of free healthcare for all,however some other people believe that healthca...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , every
...ould discuss both views. First of all,every citizen of a country has a right to goo...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
... who fails to provide its citizens with an access to good healthcare has denied them some...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...t social amenities. On the other hand,people who are of the opinion that individuals...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...s because health they say is wealth and ones health should not be compromised for an...
^^^^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...d get the best service. In conclusion,I believe healthcare should be subsidized...
^^
Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
... should be subsidized by the government.This type of arrangement sees to it that bot...
^^^^
Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...nd its citizens jointly fund healthcare.This would ensure that individuals get affor...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18834080717 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09922898379 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533632286996 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1752524704 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.7 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361598698984 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151533981704 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145812078587 0.0667982634062 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249291851176 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162412666581 0.056905535591 285% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.