Technology and relationships
Nowadays people spend a lot more time watching the television or on the internet than they do around other people which has put a strain on relationships. This essay would discuss the effects of technology on relationships.
First of all,most parents spend their leisure time on social media platforms so much so that most children have the notion that smart phones are more important than them. For example,in recent times a lot of parents spend a substantial amount of the time that ought to be used to bond with their kids on social media this makes such children reclusive and begin to have trust issues as they have neither the love not attention of their parents.
Secondly, even though watching television has its own merit, too much time shouldn't be spent watching the television as this might affect relationships with close relative, neighbours and friends. children should be encouraged to spend more time with their peers than they do watching the television in order to develop adequate social skills. for instance children that spend too much time on the television tend to live in their own world. They are often uninterested in interacting with other people. Such children might in the long run turn to a life of crime as a result of their deficient social skills.
In conclusion, even though technology has its various advantages it shouldn't be allowed be allowed to interfere with our social relationships. technology should be used in moderation in order to make our society a better and more beautiful place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0078125 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69954378018 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.622605031667 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5989309693 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.545454545 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 4.34317383033 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0890200724145 0.216113520407 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406092330763 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571140795814 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0603783507302 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485431733421 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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