some people think that a high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that a good working atmosphere is more important. discuss both views and give own opinion.
The said topic is a vexed issue as the majority of individuals consider salary as a key factor in the selection procedure of a career while others believe that the atmosphere of a particular job matters more than money. However, I opine that money is necessary to buy materialistic possessions but still it cannot buy eternal happiness. According to me, the atmosphere of a job matters the most.
To commence with, money is the fundamental need of life and other basic necessities such as food, shelter, and clothes. All these needs can only be catered with the help of money. Therefore, money ensures a high quality of life. The wealth provides power to people and this power motivates the people to work harder until they reach the zenith of success as everyone have their desire to live their life in a luxury way. Finally, money act as a driving force such as some jobs provides bonuses and perks to the employees and further promotes people to burn the midnight oil in their career which leads to getting happiness and success.
However, the atmosphere of a particular is utmost important for the well being of a worker. As, if one perform job tasks which are totally different from their skills and qualification, then it acts as a burden on them. As a result, many people become prone to stress-related diseases such as high blood pressure, diabetes, anxiety and so on. Consequently, it further causes a major disturbance in their life. Apart from this, the environment on a job should be congenial in nature as people should have the opportunity to show their talent, learn new things and perform their tasks freely rather than just getting high salary. Because these things make the job more interesting and entertaining which refreshes the mind of the employees.
To cap it all, I opine that both factors, handsome salary, and good environment, are important for a job. However, the environment of the workplace is more significant and vital than money for a balanced life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, while, apart from, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94362017804 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73939156182 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569732937685 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3803526268 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137476987029 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465321421532 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458523149689 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885615486561 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206507096276 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.