Some people think that higher salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while other think that good atmosphere is more important. Discuss both view and give your opinion with relevant example.
It is indeed true that, higher salaries is very vital for people to accomplish their important desire. While, doing work in better atmosphere is best way for feeling relaxation and comfortable. So, In my opinion. Both aspect are very profitable to find handsome salaries.
There are manifold point to shore up its reason, First and foremost, earning handsome salary is crucial for living in aristocratic lifestyle,because people can accomplish their desire. Such as, luxury car, big house and so forth, with the help of better wages, As a result, they feel happy and joyful. Secondly, Enflation is the greatest reason for this trend. because most of people are obligate for completing their family desire and nourish well. So, such salaries can provide some facility to live in comfortable life without any burdensome.
By contrast, doing work under the too much pressure is the major concern of health related problem, To be specific masses can suffer from many illness with pressure. Such as, respiratory, and so forth. Which can hang the human needs. Consequentily,it is the massive adverse effect on their promotion and reputation. What is more.choosing the best place for working comfortable is the first choice of mankind. because they want to work without any burden and pressure. Thus, there trend has significant effect on their name and fame as well as getting the huge price their owner. Which is very vital for their better performance.
To conclude, I firmly believe that, the massive number of individual want to earn handsome package for their dreams and needs.However other believe that,Doing work under the pressure to suspend their needs and also burden the life standard.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...ortable. So, In my opinion. Both aspect are very profitable to find handsome salari...
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Suggestion: Because
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...greatest reason for this trend. because most of people are obligate for completing their famil...
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Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun illness seems to be countable; consider using: 'many illnesses'.
Suggestion: many illnesses
..., To be specific masses can suffer from many illness with pressure. Such as, respiratory, an...
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...re. Such as, respiratory, and so forth. Which can hang the human needs. Consequentily...
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Suggestion: Because
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Suggestion: However
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Suggestion: , Doing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1897810219 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72788674295 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602189781022 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.0752571543 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2222222222 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165004648244 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515384306009 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448874817398 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10876936583 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588743085211 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.