Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Sports event are remarkably popular throughout the world. Different countries around the world participates in it. Hosting a sports event is always good for the country. People can have an overview about a specific country which hosts an event. This may help a country to become well knowned globally and contribute to its economy. At the same time, if a negative issue takes place in that specific country, the overall impression it had can be fully lost globally. That's why there are so many controvercies regarding this matter.
There are people who do not agree with this or, do not consider it to be a positive matter. According to my point of view, wheather it is good or not totally depends on the people of a specific country, its culture, manners, and other related issues. The more you have well manners, positive attitudes, the less you fear to represent yourself to others. Likewise, different countries have different languages, cultures, environment and people. If the majority of people of a country considers it to be something good that means that country have so many positive people compared to the negative ones.
However, I think that hosting an International sports event is good for the country if the overall attitude of the people is good. If its not then the country may have a risk of impression throughout the world. For this type of issues, there should be a vote or a public discussion session to introduce people with the advantages and disadvantages of hosting an international sports event.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...the world participates in it. Hosting a sports event is always good for the country. P...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...sion it had can be fully lost globally. Thats why there are so many controvercies reg...
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Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...overall attitude of the people is good. If its not then the country may have a ris...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, may, regarding, so, then, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96108949416 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76050774933 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509727626459 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4002820069 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235417194216 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888525721675 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996962293274 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186249964048 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872721740812 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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