Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones in communication has negative effect on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Today's world society has been surrounded with full of technologies and we cannot imagine our life without any technology as people get used to have. Now people have adapted to do educational or household activities relying on technologies and it causes a lot of problems to humans' health. I totally disagree with it.
Firstly, a recent decade people had not predicted that the world would have completely changed to technology era. Most of our grandparents' habit or attitudes to community really conventional comparing to young generation. They mostly get accustomed reading books, newspapers and doing housework differently. And most elderly people are more healthy and fit enough than youngsters because at their young age much work has been done by physical strength but now it turned round.
Secondly, our new generation is being born in technology age and part of their jobs or house and housework have been done by computer technology. A lot of adults have addicted to work mainly on their homework via computer and phone, it leads to many eye and health diseases. Of course, reading and writing on a phone or computer may damage our eyesight and reduces our memory and then less physical activities make us weak and cannot put up with small illnesses. It would be more effective to complete their job physically.
In conclusion, I would differently support the idea of s person who tries to read book and use less technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00836820084 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78964991909 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644351464435 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1660231612 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165735465572 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580992431409 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0184881577337 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933972321854 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208792176259 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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