Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Gone are the days when climate change issues were randomly visualized in certain places. Not only that, people tend to control the environment through the consumption of fossil fuel. However, at present, tables have turned. Nowadays, it is noticed that climate change has become detrimental factors in various circumstances. I opine that why we should think about preventing climate change. this vital point must be considered to bring out the solution.
One of the most convincing reasons I have in this regard is to control cutting down trees in remote areas. In addition to that, the consumption of fossil fuel varies through the high density of global warming. As a result, the environmental department or bureau should exist in this policy and maintain the petition such as natural disasters as well as the overflow of sea level on certain coastal zone areas. For instance, in most of the developed cities were organized the camp and also conferences to explore the information. So the research could be steadily improved wherein to find a solution to the problem.
On the other hand, municipal cooperation should conduct the exhibition of tree planting on open land spaces. In contrast, many trees are cut-down and its results into deforestation whilst forest fires may occur in a hilarious situation. Moreover, major countries are facing this kind of issue and conquer the solution by the researchers or environmental specialists in this field. For example, I can cite an example of this. A recent survey by an international organization in this matter revealed a shocking testimony that 98 % of pollution have prevailed through more vehicles instead of using public transportation. Furthermore, it considered a respiratory disease. Apart from that, less plantation of trees is covered with the surrounding area.
In conclusion, I disagree that climate change should be prevented but need to be curious about the next generation. They should live a healthy lifestyle and a cure. Eventually, there must be a tree plantation camp to grow more trees to secure from hazardous climate change.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23145400593 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94218534527 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620178041543 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1939695426 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9523809524 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0476190476 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61904761905 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117281026801 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332342727486 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404860668874 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725589972787 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032526395984 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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