Today, many parents force their children to study all kind of courses in their early age.
What are the reasons behind this?
What effects do you think this practice would bring to the children?
In today's era, parents are mainly focusing on their children to receive good education to bright their future. Not only that, nowadays parents are overwhelmed about their children to participate in extra-cirriculam activities to improve their skills and abilties.
One of the most convincing reason that is firstly viewed is asserted that some people think to extravagant spending on their children. Such as athletics, musical instrument coaching, dancing and additional recreational activities as a comparison to their education. As a result, it should be an optimistic outcome for developing and exploring their internal talent. Secondly, certain parents are not thinking about their children and forcing them to get involved in training. As my view is also buoyed in this fact that many parents have indulge their children as viewing other children's perceptions. This is due to my observation, that the comparison may affect the health and mentally of their children in a stage at early age group. Consequently, it would be a detrimental outcome among focusing a child to enroll in undesirable training which may not be according to their expectations.
The trends of both aspects into positive and negative effects are more conventional for parents about their children. Some researchers believes that small age group children's should be given more freedom and spend their own valuable time. I can cite an example of this. A recent survey by an international education organisation in this matter has revealed an shocking testimony that 55 % of children under small age groups are suffering by a chronic disease such as mental stresses, dilemmas and mental pressure caused by their attitude.
In conclusion, I must advisable to guardians that they should concentrate their children and endeavor their education knowledge that it can only rely upon their resume to make a proper future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35906040268 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96133025032 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580536912752 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6291538986 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.071428571 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374221885567 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142416470522 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612995534888 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232219864147 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616184315372 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.