Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the way to find an adaptation of climate alternation to live on the Earth has been revealed by experts, using advanced technology. Thanks to current research, many people can cope with this severe condition by creating artificial weather so that they do not worry to detrimental effect of global warming, causing food scarcity. For instance, the USA scientists have discovered drone technology to increase intensity of precipitation artificially since 2019, this prevention has solved the reduction of agricultural production in that period as the harm result of high-rise temperature globally. Nevertheless, it is not viable because this solution only offers short-term solution, and is not able to halt the global heating process.
Nonetheless, overcoming climate alternation to do environmental conservation is a best agreement. This is because, if people still waste the nature, the heat rise considerably, and the long-term demerit originates the edge of human extinction because waste causes the greenhouse effect, warming our beloved planet. For example, Indonesia in 2020 was the third rank country producing the most amount of waste disposal, being one of the major contributors generating the greenhouse gases about 15%. When this problem is not tackled, the human-being can be predicted to vanish in 200 years later.
In conclusion, it is true that people should conserve the surroundings instead of researching a remedy to live under this hot atmosphere. Where possible, people do not waste in the environment to stop the warming of the Earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 81, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ion to do environmental conservation is a best agreement. This is because, if peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, still, third, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48760330579 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09101957641 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673553719008 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3212436592 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.8 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131858211952 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527631035217 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469237510227 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09421995465 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398050445782 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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