Some people think that it is necessary to travel to learn about other countries. Others feel same can be learnt through TV and internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Talking about education is nothing end. Some individuals believe to get a new information or study about foreign countries should be visiting it nations, while others oppose this because TV and Internet was provided many information from whole country. I will examine both viewpoints and convey the opinion.
Learn about other countries have many path to achieve it, some people think that will be better if hands-on learning because we know everything by physical. Moreover, science we get from visiting the country have big impact, because we can see by our eyes about culture in there. As illustration, each people come to India, almost every place they provide tour guide during our journey and we must pay around $5 to know knowledge and custom in there and the tour guide will explain everything. One of the best reason why we should visit the country is because it is look more real.
On the other hand, nowdays, almost all TV shows education about foreign countries such as culture even social life in there. Furthermore, people can accsess a million information by internet without come to the other country. TV and intenet is linelife of all people in the world because wherever we are more easily with internet and we will know anything what we need. For instace, curently, some media it is Times conducted survey and declared that around 343.000 clips every years represents about Niagara airflow for free on youtube and everyone can watching this only use internet connection. Fundamentally, internet dan TV is big fountain for every single person to gather information.
To conclude, both of this way will help everyone to know about other culture in the world.
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| 2023-04-13 | Desi Sari Ayuni | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...is because TV and Internet was provided many information from whole country. I will ...
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Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...is because TV and Internet was provided many information from whole country. I will examine both...
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Line 2, column 34, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun path seems to be countable; consider using: 'many paths'.
Suggestion: many paths
...nion. Learn about other countries have many path to achieve it, some people think that w...
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Line 2, column 408, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uring our journey and we must pay around to know knowledge and custom in there an...
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Line 3, column 554, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'watch'
Suggestion: watch
...ow for free on youtube and everyone can watching this only use internet connection. Fund...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, while, even so, such as, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00716845878 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52012875327 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5770609319 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7362909264 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.461538462 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271804622156 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102192898201 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666074790925 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172743445153 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313758826829 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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