Some people think job satisfaction is more important than job security. But others believe that people can not always enjoy their jobs and having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both view and give your opinon.
People have different standards when they in search of their job. A vast majority claimed that a sense of satisfaction is a vital point to consider, while stability seekers hold an opposite opinion. In my personal opinion, I strongly agree with the former perspective. This essay will highlight higher achievements as a merit of caring more about job satisfaction, whereas promotion opportunities is a utility of considering more about job security.
A prominent claim to deliberate is that people who do not mind facing hardships in their job tend to be individuals with a clearly defined path for development. The rationale behind this is that this group of people believe negative feelings or moments they have to experience would pay for their future stability. According to PEW Center, 65% of employees in big companies claimed that they would ignore difficulties in their job to be trusted with more responsibility.
There is an argument of justification, which can demonstrate that statement, to wit; individuals who put their mental feelings on top remaining that dissatisfied lower work quality. This borne by the fact that people who force themselves to accept bad things in the workplace tend to suffer from serious sicknesses such as stress or trauma, and hence, they could not show their full ability. The Times recently reported that Steve Jobs claimed that enjoyment while working landed people in better results and decisions.
In my personal opinion, I believe that one should choose the job that they feel enjoy while doing. Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, as mirrored by a case of my friend, who decided to quit his job because he could not handle how pressure it is.
Subsequently weighing all of the aforementioned, this now can be safely stated that job satisfaction is more important than job insecurity and that people who force themselves to do what they do not enjoy, tend to give false decisions and suffer from serious health problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...seekers hold an opposite opinion. In my personal opinion, I strongly agree with the former persp...
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Line 8, column 7, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...in better results and decisions. In my personal opinion, I believe that one should choose the j...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Subsequently,
...uld not handle how pressure it is. Subsequently weighing all of the aforementioned, thi...
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Line 11, column 23, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ssure it is. Subsequently weighing all of the aforementioned, this now can be safely ...
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Line 11, column 277, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd suffer from serious health problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, whereas, while, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15692307692 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88572737541 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587692307692 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.4682742467 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.923076923 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349751239551 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123621562568 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889590282483 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201154350943 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654070123832 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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