Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both the views and give your view.
Opinions differ as to whether family pets will have positive influences on children or they are just a potential threat to kids. I believe adopting pets is beneficial for the young.
It is understandable why people say that pets pose harmful threats to infants in the family. One reason is that these animals could be a source of infectious diseases that affect the children’s physical health. Although most nowadays pets are vaccinated before coming into the family, there would always be a potential which pets carry undiscovered bacteria or viruses while wandering around the neighborhood back to their houses. As a consequence, it is highly likely that kids will be infected victims of diseases since they have more interaction with family animals than the adults. Another reason is the potential that pets would attack human, which is the children in this case. People cannot deny the fact that these friendly pets are tamed animals, which means they still possess some wild instincts to unintentionally hurt the children while playing.
However, I would side with those who think that having a pet at home would affect positively on the young. One reason to support my standpoint is that kids will have a loyal friend to have fun with when they are at home. At young ages, most children do not have the skill to socialize at schools resulting in kids’ lack of happiness. This is when pets become a helpful option to keep children accompanied after boring hours at school. Furthermore, it is also an opportunity for infants to study about animals. Parents could take the advantage to teach kids some biological knowledge of dogs and cats.
In conclusion, I believe that adopting family pets will benefit the young when they are at home. After all, pets are not just animals but trust-worthy friends to kids even when they grow older.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
Opinions differ as to whether family pets will have positive influenc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, while, after all, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9935483871 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64902157344 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558064516129 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8858505758 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.75 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170242310403 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593538285137 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340558099503 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100678812544 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409889146917 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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