Some people think that maintaining public libraries is a waste of public money since a computer system can replace their function. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary era , libraries plays a vital role in the development of any society by providing knowledge. Majority of people opine that governments should not spend money on libraries because it is a wastage of public money as computer take the place of libraries. I mostly disagree with this statement because I think that public have its own importance.
To begin with, libraries are the best source of getting knowledge. First of all. Libraries offered a large variety of books in any language and it is beneficial for gaining every type of information. Nowadays, each person like to visit library because it provides every type of book which are not available online. Moreover, library is a comfortable and quiet place. Due to positive and convenient environment a person can fully concentrate on study and it also give books on rent so that masses get benefit after reading books. Subsequently, it also save money of person as books are issued at very less cost .
Moving further, maintaining public libraries is not a wastage of money because it deliver worldwide information and valuable for those people who do not have computer or internet access at home . For instance, people who have financial difficulty can easily get books in rent.
On the other hand, computers also have benefits to offer. Firstly, in computer thousands of data can be stored easily and it save time and space. Apart from this, computer system is also extremely good for old aged people because old people do not visit library due to health issues.
In gist, I would like to assert that public libraries are essential for people and I think that computer system cannot take the place of public libraries because libraries have its own benefits which cannot be neglected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, apart from, for instance, i think, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0406779661 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65523407743 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532203389831 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1736174597 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9375 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268844652842 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838214349071 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745805115335 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171478751653 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605686390944 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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