Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree?
In today’s advanced world, it is commonly deemed that men and women are in possession of distinctive characteristics and skills. Hereby, some kinds of occupation are ascribed to men and some are attributed to women. From my personal perspective, I partly agree with the aforementioned statement. The following essay will explicitly clarify my viewpoint.
It is evident that there are several jobs beonging entirely to each gender. To begin with, it is somehow subordinate to male and female strengths. Politics or military are seemingly male-dominated field as men are assertive and insusceptible. Meanwhile, women take priority over their spouses in terms of nursing and beautification due to their nurturing and conscientiousness. Additionally, personal health feature of each sex is another primary reason. Women often suffer from numerous maternal issues during pregnancy. Thus, letting them assume burdensome tasks including constructional or management affairs may have an adverse influence on their well-being. These affairs should be taken on by men who are more physically robust that women.
Nonetheless, gender disparity should be irrelevant in vocational choice. First and foremost, it is likely unfair to evaluate one’s ability based on gender. Contemporary era has witnessed various women holding high position at workplaces as well as their achievement in certain domains, which manifests the eradication of gender-based constraints. Besides, there is an intense upsurge in the number of men who embark on the beautician career and become success stories. Another worth-noting point is that men and women should have access to the same professional opportunities. This is an advantageous way to challenge themselves and enhance lacking skills. Moreover, if males join the domestics, they may generate more benefits from culinary skills or child-rearing that assist enormously to their househusband role.
To recapitulate, career option should be picked out based on personal qualities rather than gender. By this way, women are given chance to be on par with their spouses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, thus, well, while, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66666666667 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22047806419 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64126984127 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0022674981 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.80952380952 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193707103549 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525720331712 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729306354123 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118843854222 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669288710838 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.01 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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