It is an undeniable tendency that sports have become well-known in society for many years. Many people hold a belief that a major contribution to a success in sport is a stable mental prowess whereas others claim by no means to succeed without a robust and well-built shape. There are valid arguments on both sides, which I will discuss now before declaring a position.
A strong mentality is considered as a bedrock for all winning. As preparing for sports events, sportspeople often have to go through a rigorous routine daily, this can be challenging making them want to give up. Once their bodies are completely exhausted and refuse any further practice, determination to achieve is the only thing that pushes them forwards. Elite players, who often perform in world-class events, may bear the pressure the audience places on, for instance, from the massive crowd. In many cases, just a small mistake or a moment of distraction can cost them a defeat, even seeded players can bitterly lose to underdogs if they don’t obtain mental toughness. Firming a strong-will beforehand is a fundamental thing, hence it may set them apart and increases their chance of success to the highest.
Nevertheless, physical fitness is a prerequisite for joining a sport as well as it defines how well the sportsman’s performance will be. This is irrefutable that several sports require stamina, flexibility, or agility. Marathon athletes, which demand brute strength and enduring stamina, can be a good case in point. In the second place, since the players have high-intensity training frequently, outstanding bodily strength is vital. Noticeably, physical toughness makes them be able to avoid unintended injuries during the games which can easily ruin their careers.
In brief, it is both physical and mental fitness that are instrumental in equal measure. Because as mentioned above, the consolidation between an extraordinary bodily strength and a well-prepared mind is the game-changing element in deciding the achievements of athletes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, well, whereas, for instance, in brief, as well as, in many cases, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31578947368 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02462678435 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637770897833 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4288690464 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.3125 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167854144382 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534837696376 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391113225924 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986425781627 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358099353849 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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