Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other,
while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and
give your own opinion.
Changes in a variety of aspects in modern society have affected human relationships, and whether we are living a less dependent life has become a heated topic of controversy. In this essay, I am going to analyze these opposing ideas before expressing my own.
On the one hand, some people argue that living independently on other people is the norm of modern lifestyle. Family members, for example, have lived independently on each other over time, and children tend to move out after reaching adulthood to go to college or work elsewhere. Equally, it is quite common that grandparents are now no longer stay under the same roof with their children or grandchildren, and live on their pension or their own saving money. At the same time, families also have become dispersed than ever, and people could not rely on their relatives as in the past when extended families were predominant in society.
On the other hand, there are two major clues on why people believe that humans are more dependent on each other. In the family scale, although living away from home, economic pressure makes young adults often have to rely on their parents financially. That is usually true to most of the students who have not started a professional career yet, and it is also the case of many young people who only just begin working and need money for living expenses or housing fee. In the entire society scale, labor distribution has caused a high dependence among every sector of the community as each sector today is only specialized in one area, meaning that it has indirectly connected people in all sectors together. For instance, people working in the dairy industry need products made by workers from cattle feeding companies and also need to sell their dairy products to customers.
In conclusion, although it is true that modern society makes people independent to some extent, I would argue that we are now living a dependent life more than ever.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89425981873 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58295966215 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564954682779 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.4842291 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5833333333 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252676522306 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101060531788 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878383748773 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15522372936 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309385332769 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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