Although it is sometimes thought that money is the best gift to give youngsters, others simply do not agree with it. In my opinion, I too disagree as children like toys and gifts, and money has little value for them.
On the one hand, it is often disregarded by some that money does not make the best gift for children as they like toys and surprises more than money, and I second this thought. In other words, children cherish the toys and feel loved by the person who has brought it for them. Another reason is that the parents say that money gives children a choice to spend on various things, and they may spend on things which are harmful for them. They also believe that they may develop bad habits, ranging from eating chocolates to smoking cigarettes. Thus, they want to regulate the money their child has.
On the other hand, some people say money that it is better if money is given as a gift. It is because it will make them more responsible and with the parents’ help, they will learn to save from a young age. Every parent endeavour to teach such good habits. Another reason is that they can give money to their parents which in turn can be utilised to spend on development or education. Spending on their education will make them feel satisfied and independent from a young age. Further, even if children want to get gifts, they will also be able to buy gifts of their choice.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions, I think money gives a power which children are too young to handle, and they like gifts more than money.
- The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take? Do you think the advantages outweigh the d 84
- Employers sometimes ask peoples applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both views 67
- More people are spending their free time watching movies, why is this? Is it a good or bad? 67
- Some people think money is the best gift to give to youngsters while others disagree Discuss both views and give your opinion 32
- Some People think that team sports prepare children for work life. Discuss both sides and give your opinion 100
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, second, so, thus, while, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52919708029 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25597341704 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525547445255 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5252722219 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6428571429 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23958646898 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911307204578 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970885406317 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183864840465 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601269242666 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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