some people think that money is one of the essential factors in promoting happiness. Do you think people can be happy without money.
what other factors contribute towards happiness.
Wealth is one of the essential factors of our life and every people dreamed to earn sufficient money. Some people claim that, money cannot buy happiness, however, some argue that, without money no one can live happily. I partially agree on this arguments and this essay support for and against on both opinion.
First and foremost, happiness lies on every individual’s perception, while some people strongly agree that, making more money is only way of being happy in life. In every step on life money is essential, even to fulfill basic need money is important, so, without earning we can feed ourselves. For example, with enough money you do not have to struggle for whatever you need in life and society give you high class named and give same level recognition and respect. When you get everything as you needed in life, you can experience real happiness. Without money being happy is only shown on real life, but in real life it is not possible.
Secondly, our society is the best example of proofing that, only money cannot give us all happiness, there are many other factors related to happiness. For instance, the BBC survey has revealed that, people are happier in developing country rather than developed country. There are many family problems and divorce rate are accounted in rich society than in average society because of their ego and self respect. A loving and caring family with one satisfied job and seeing dream are coming true is the real happiness that every person can feel. Such as, one doctor travel to rural area and do volunteering to poor people without huge salary or sometime free, only to live is dreams and it can make him more happy than earning big amount.
In conclusion, Money and happiness both are very important in people’s life, both are independent with each other. Hence, people need to utilize money very effectively and give importance to their family too, because, when time flies you can earn money but cannot spend same time with family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87058823529 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36607364599 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538235294118 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.879172739 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.4 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375733876495 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131684435072 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784102060968 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23750801175 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317026807461 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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