some people think that money is one of the essential factors in promoting happiness.
Do you think people can be happy without money.
what other factors contribute towards happiness.
Some people think that money as a vital factor to measure happiness, but in my view, to some extent money is essential factor, however, other factors also play lead role as money on creating happiness.
To begin, the most important factor contributing to individual happiness is healthy, loving and happy family. Our society is real example of, despite of having enough wealth some people cannot get care and love of family. Divorce rate is always high in rich people society than others. For example, many research has revealed, depression is common among the rich family due to broken family and business tension. It is also revealed that, people from developing country are more happier than from developed country, which proof money cannot buy happiness. As a time flies, each individuals can get chance to earn million but cannot get change to live with family again.
Secondly, apart from family, inner peace and job satisfaction are other factors which analyze the level of happiness in people. Such as, many people have certain goal in their life and after achieving those goal how they feel is the real happiness. For intense, many doctors are doing volunteering job at many underdeveloped country , they many earn little but the reward of helping people and doing their job they are good at brings happiness in itself. Likewise, one scientist spend his entire life in research, after many years hard work generating new formula is thousand fold happiness than earning more money. So for many people who are passionate in their dream job satisfaction and inner peace bring more happiness than earning more money.
In sum up, money is also essential factor for each individual’s life but alone money cannot bring happiness , hence, people also need satisfaction and peace of mind to feel real happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much research', 'a good deal of research'.
Suggestion: much research; a good deal of research
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Suggestion: happier
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Suggestion: a million
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Message: Did you mean 'this goal' or 'those goals'?
Suggestion: this goal; those goals
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, apart from, for example, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48377923351 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561872909699 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1928927261 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.769230769 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35789569214 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124550267123 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997795624843 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240478894944 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704199255421 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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