Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness.
Do you think people can be happy without much money?
What other factors contribute towards happiness?
happiness is a goal of most people's lives. Among many of them, money is one of the most essential parts to get happiness. A new car or an expensive smartphone can make someone happy. Even so, it does not mean that happiness is all about money.
Everybody has their own definition about happiness. For example, with an unemployed man, a stable job will be his joy. he does not need a lot of money to be pleasure, he just need a job to make a living by himself without relying on anyone. For a child, his gladness can come from a good meal and a new hand-made toy by his parents. Besides, an old mother may feel happiness when her children coming home after a long time distance. Clearly, they do not need money to reach happiness.
In addition, there are many factors contributed to happiness. The first thing here is a good health. people may not realize that good health is one of the most important things for a good life. For instance, you cannot enjoy the feeling of supreme sports if you get some serious heart diseases, no matter how you like it. Moreover, strong health can give you energy to work well and get over your challenges. In addition to this, relationships are the essential factor for happiness. A person can have many relationships such as family or friends. The one who knows how to get on well with these ones will get a lot of benefits. A person has many friends to share the things as well as get help tend to be happier than the others. Last but not least, the feeling of achieving success can also make you happy. if a boy try to learn how to play the guitar, he will be pleased when he actually can play it after many days of diligent practice. The feeling you get when achieving something through many difficulties will be your happiness.
there are many ways to define happiness. we all have own opinion about it and do our best to get it. some people may consider money as the most essential thing while the others care about some different things. it depends on the way we think, our happiness will be shaped like that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, even so, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41952506596 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42417182686 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514511873351 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7099490332 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.4230769231 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5769230769 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42307692308 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 8.67935871743 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292297901812 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764392307697 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700343890423 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193563600927 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713065370536 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 13.0946893788 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 12.4159519038 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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