Some people think that more and more people are becoming dependent on each other and other think that more and more people are becoming independent. Discuss both view and opinion.
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades. Presently, gone are days when people haveto face many difficulty in life. Hence, some people belive that a large number of people are relying on each other in contemporary world. However, other reckon that they are becoming independent. Here, i will also discuss both views in this essay.
There are manifold views to endorse my point and view. First and foremost, relying on each other have become a part of life. Hence, in moder times, busiest lifestyle is a vital reason of dependent on each other. To elaborate, more and more people are working around the clock for bread and butter. Hence, they donot devote time own work . Due to this, they do work from each other. In addition to this, nowadays, most of people have becom richest. Thus, they all work with the help of wealth. Therefore, they donot haveto face difficulty in life. Apart from this, it can be seen that in childhood most of adolescents are vulnerable . Thus, they depend on their guardians because their parents have massive knowledge about social and cultural values. On the contrary, opposite wind is also there.
To commence with, a massive number of folks have bèen educated in modern times. Therefore, they have lot of knowledge about work which they do own their own. Last but not least, most of people have become techsavy with the help of technology. Due to this, they can work easily and saves time. Thus , they didnot haveto depend on each other.
From my notion, both sides have their own significance. Hence, relying on each other is quite essential for them. However, it depends on person.
To recaptulate, undeniably, people are being depending on each other . However, their are more benefit of dependent on each other outweigh the drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, apart from, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95709570957 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39922568474 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524752475248 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.2947417626 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.6296296296 106.682146367 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.2222222222 20.7667163134 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324301170311 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906908792214 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944812841012 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212808251397 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106132880224 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.3 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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