some people believe that modern technology is increasing the gap between poor and rich. while other disagree . give your opinion.
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades. Presently, technology hasolutions become a part and parcel of ouraman life.Hence some masses argue that generation gap has increased in poor and rich people due to the modern advancement technology. However, other discord from this statement. Here,this essay will discuss both viewsides with my own perception.
There are manifold views to endorse my point and view. First and formost, most of peoplease have become techsavy with the help of technology which they are using various types of technology. Ultimately, it is increasing generation gap in poor and rich people. because richest person have lot of wealth.Thus , they can work easily with the help odesk technology. moreover, they van save time from this system.In addtion to this, technology puts adverse implication on underprivileged people. To elaborate, technology is not available then labour are doing all work . But nowadays most of work had dependent on technology. As a result, unemployment has incresed due to technology . Apart from this, who belong to downtrodden family they are lack of knowledge about technology. Thus , they donot enoy in life and they have to face many difficulty in life . Beside it , living standard is also increasing gap between poor and rich people. Richest person have educated and they have lot of knowledge about what is happening in contemporary world.
Ton recaptiulate, undeniably, technology is vital in every individual life. hence, there are more benefits of technology in poor and rich people life outweigh the drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, apart from, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40963855422 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95982064567 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606425702811 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1493814301 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8333333333 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8333333333 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210770744882 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687283464802 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958387183501 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161231227416 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385674783591 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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