It is good idea for teenage to have job while their study. To what extent do you agree or diasagree?

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...sential for tennagers with studies. Here,i would like to accord with given stateme...
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...ential for tennagers with studies. Here,i would like to accord with given stateme...
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Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... my point and views. First and foremost, doing work along with studyis vital for ...
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... for juveniles. They can earn excessive wealth via part time job. To elaborate, ...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
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Suggestion: part-time
...s. They can earn excessive wealth via part time job. To elaborate, they van invest amon...
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...y van invest amonut on their study. Thus,they donot have to face many difficulty in l...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun difficulty seems to be countable; consider using: 'many difficulties'.
Suggestion: many difficulties
...eir study. Thus,they donot have to face many difficulty in life. Apart from this, some offsprin...
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Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...some offspring belong to underprivileged family who donot afford financially ame...
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...ged family who donot afford financially amenities to their adolescents. Theref...
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... who donot afford financially amenities to their adolescents. Therefore, their...
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...ities to their adolescents. Therefore, their children do work in working secto...
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...adolescents. Therefore, their children do work in working sectors. To com...
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...r children do work in working sectors. To commence with, doing work in market...
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...tors. To commence with, doing work in market can become self dependent thei...
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...ome successful carrer in life. Moreover, due to earning money, they can fullfil t...
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... On the contrary, opposite is also there . Further emphasizing to support my p...
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Suggestion: Further,
... contrary, opposite is also there . Further emphasizing to support my point on view...
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Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
..., if they will work in market with study . Thus , theh can divert from their study...
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...ey will work in market with study . Thus , theh can divert from their study. To il...
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Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ll earn more money in life. Furthermore, they cannot make concentration in study ...
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Line 7, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... their duture as well as they can forget study value in life. Beside it, some bel...
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...Beside it, some belive that, they should not work in working sectors. Moreover, ...
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... not work in working sectors. Moreover, they should take addmissions in higher s...
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Line 7, column 442, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... should take addmissions in higher study . Thus, they van get well paid job in lif...
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...n get well paid job in life. Ultimately, they can make bright future in life. ...
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...ight future in life. To recaptulate, undeniably, there are more benefits of p...
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Line 9, column 58, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
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Suggestion: part-time
... undeniably, there are more benefits of part time job to outweigh the academic education....
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Line 9, column 117, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
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Suggestion: I
...tweigh the academic education. However, i think that study sets the foundatio of ...
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Line 9, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...at study sets the foundatio of juveniles in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, i think, as well as, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21455938697 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61381710757 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60153256705 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7688971068 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.7083333333 106.682146367 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.875 20.7667163134 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119446131036 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402000365768 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422274694338 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789906539548 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437368931457 0.056905535591 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 50.2224549098 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.75 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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