Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about the functions and roles of museums in today's society. In my opinion, museums could be entertaining and educational at the same time for everybody.
On the one hand, the main goal of every museum is to attract loads of visitors to increase their profits. Therefore, if they display samples that contain educational knowledge, many maybe feel discouraged to go to museums. For example, a student who is given a lot of homework every single day will likely go to some enjoyable places to boost their energy rather than someplace as academic as their school.
On the other hand, it is argued that museums should be made to serve educational purposes. Museums can be a practical way to create students' interest in some subjects. History is a good case in point. They will find it more fascinating to see some remnants about the war in person than listen to their teacher's lengthy words in class. Secondly, students will gain a great deal of information from such informative places. It is ideal for them to know more about the city's history, culture, arts. By that, they can even introduce to their foreign friends Vietnam's cultural identity.
In conclusion, in spite of some debates about the main roles of museums, I still believe that we can combine the two purposes to museums visitors both informative and fascinating as well.
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- Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ational at the same time for everybody. On the one hand, the main goal of every ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93073593074 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64542900768 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623376623377 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4684595337 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6153846154 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25733401547 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828489961251 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828848642798 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159023664739 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740992949909 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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