Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There are some ideas about the role and function of museum whenever for entertaining visitors or serving for educational purpose. In this essay, I will analyze both of perspectives.
On the one hand, it is obvious that the vital aim of museum is to leveraging public historical awareness. Museums are extraordinary classrooms with collections of ancient inheritance. Through those tangible objects, museum provides information with realistic experiences which books and lectures in school cannot bring us. As a result, this approach not only imparts knowledge visitors, but also arouses curiosity about history, especially teenagers. Additionally, local antique connects modern people to their ancestors. Museum preserves archaic which reveals interesting information about lifestyle, beliefs and production activities of their era.
The ones who support idea of museum should be a place for relaxing has their reasons. Museum contains such an enormous amount of knowledge that people find it too rough to absorb. If people come to a museum and just listen or read a ton of information, they would lose their attention. Consequently, there is hard to find a chance they would come to museum again. Secondly, A museum cannot attract guests if managers do not elevate visitor’s experiences. Young people who are main target audience of museum are fascinated by spectacular places and interesting activities. Therefore, to entice them, museums should be destination full of excitement.
It is my beliefs that, museums should be both instructive and entertaining. The combination of these two factors makes museum fulfil of visitors’ demand.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7171314741 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4109123801 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665338645418 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0270022148 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.4117647059 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7647058824 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305721108635 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961602047888 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520309378471 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17754993739 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591850813967 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.3 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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