It goes without saying that music has always been a way to gather the people even in various age groups and many cultures around the world.This is certainly true that music brings the harmony among people and togetherness in various cultures.
To embark upon, there are many reasons that support why music is important bringing unity in the society. First and foremost, the beats or genres are universally accepted by the world without any interpretation. As a reason, many cultures,ideologies and many theories of the people are associated with the music which help to listener experiencing many aspects of society.Secondly, new genres or beats always influence to the people no matter where it has been produced in, or who have it.These beats give the audience long lasting relaxation,and resonate forever in thier mind.
on the other hand, music never compromise with the age differences because whatever the age group either child or older the relaxation level is most likely to similar after listening the same beats.So that, music always makes the bridge in age differences.For example, a popular song ,Ki-Ki do you love me is sung by Drake, became famous with Ki-Ki style in it's beat is loved and liked by almost every every age group of people.
In conclusion, it is needless to say that music is universally accepted by all walks of life.Certainly, beats or genres of different music classes with different cultural values enure the unity and equality among societies.
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first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11934156379 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92837031012 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600823045267 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.984043943 49.4020404114 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 207.333333333 106.682146367 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.5 20.7667163134 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0917110340132 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482359486549 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266208349751 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0573914160225 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193477885716 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.9 13.0946893788 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 10.7795591182 213% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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