some people think the news has no connection to people’ life so it is a waste of time to read the news in the newspaper and watch television news programmes.to what extent do you agree or disagree
it is Certainly a fact that , news are must important for everyone’ life .it reveal that news programmes on television. With news people can get more information. This essay will discuss vies points in my upcoming paragraphs reaching to a logical conclusion
To commence with, now a days masses are read newspaper , watch television news programmes. Firstly lot of people gain information regarding politicians circumstances of country. Moreover , those folks are think that news is waste of time. they think not correct because news is connection to people’s life .secondly , people easily watch latest news rapidly by internet. It has become more helpful for everyone’ life .some people are watch news television because they do collect more knowledge from news.
On the other hand, some news television is show fake news . Firstly, when masses are watch television or read newspapers sometimes play a negative role in public because those news channel show inaccurate information. Therefore some people think that news and newspaper is waste of time.Next to it, many television and news do not depict real news . When young student watch the criminal news on television then they think about crime. so young can walk to the criminal road.
To conclude, i agree for read newspapers and watch television it helpful to everyone. However the government should that television show only right information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33632286996 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81158282783 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57399103139 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6253179627 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.58991294517 0.244688304435 241% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217265800192 0.084324248473 258% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128395358407 0.0667982634062 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.343050151227 0.151304729494 227% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158082980397 0.056905535591 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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