Options are divided that whether news has no connection to one’s life and reading the newspapers is wasteful. I strongly disagree with the statement, and I believe there is a sharp connection between news and people.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why people believe news has no connection to individuals. Due to technological advances in recent years, people can catch up with all the latest information, including trivial news, by surfing social media platforms like Facebook with ease. Therefore, the number of information bearing no values to people’s lives is increasing, which can cause disturbances and distractions to them. Kenh14, for example, the most famous tabloid in Vietnam, offers the latest news revolving around the private life of influencers both on and off stage, thus attracting millions of viewers every day. These people spend hours reading such news having no clues to their lives, leading to a waste of time.
On the other hand, I believe reading or watching television news programs are worth considering. Because the Covid-19 is getting worse globally, people need to update news about the problem. For instance, thanks to enormous efforts of the Vietnamese government, confirmed cases and restricted zones had been updated up to the minute on social networking sites to raise their citizens’ awareness about the danger of the epidemic and how to prevent from being infected, thus putting the problem under control quickly. Besides, the amount spent reading or watching news enables viewers to expand their knowledge, leading to people having multiple-dimensional perspectives towards a problem and enhancing higher living standards.
In conclusion, I reaffirm that despite a series of useless information on the newspaper and programs, reading newspapers and watching news programs regularly provide watchers with numerous informative content.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49828178694 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91966011002 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615120274914 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0642568134 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.333333333 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406907974285 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159897979074 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081301518425 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235916460471 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613336059094 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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