Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives. So then it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that spending time to update news by newspaper and news programs is not beneficial for human life because of wasting much time. From my perspective, I completely disagree with this view point. The supporting reasons will be discussed throughout this essay.
First and foremost, somehow people actually need to know generally their current nation situation where they are living as well as the world situation. For instance, in the lengthened period of Covid 19, Vietnam government enacted and enforced new policies relevant to force citizens must be in their own house. All of these legislation was notified through social media such as digital paper and news programs on television. If anyone had neglected these regulations, they would have definitely imposed a severe penalty. That’s a reason why human in modern life have to aware of how important news updating is.
Better still, the fact that most people have to deal with difficult issues when approaching multiple information from diverse resources. Indeed, amount of news about the politics, the fights happen in other country or even global climate change provided mainly by common languages. Therefore, these news must be edited briefly and translated by journalists or reporters in order to easier understand for the older and the others people who cannot comprehensive given languages.
In conclusion, although many people believe that it is waste time to update the news by traditional ways such as newspaper and new programs, I am convinced that approaching the news through old-school method is still the fastest among different ways. Thus I maintain the opinion that supporting human continues to read newspaper and watch news programs as the previous.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 319, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this legislation' or 'these legislations'?
Suggestion: this legislation; these legislations
...zens must be in their own house. All of these legislation was notified through social media such ...
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Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
... mainly by common languages. Therefore, these news must be edited briefly and translated b...
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Line 4, column 252, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...still the fastest among different ways. Thus I maintain the opinion that supporting ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, briefly, first, if, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32246376812 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71284402137 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663043478261 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8452041695 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282594978 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888768033492 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929351580179 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177739668928 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078533669422 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.