Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives. Therefore, it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today’s world, there are more people showing no interest in reading newspapers or watching news on television, especially teenagers. They raised an argument that news separates people’s lives, I totally disagree with this point of view. This argument shall be discussed in this essay to justify why this viewpoint received many disagreements.
To commence with, the news benefits human beings in every aspect of daily life. From the economy to politics, the news is presented by diverse ways of media such as television, newspaper, social media. It is common sense that people have to be aware of their surroundings to make the right decision in investing, traveling,... For instance, the year of 2021 has experienced an extremely severe pandemic called Covid-19. Its impacts on travel, businesses, transportation, health,... are uncountable.
Moreover, people need to get updated with the news all over the globe. General knowledgement allows people to decide whether to travel or not. Through TV programmes, the destination can be visualized from the information to prepare for accomodation, budget, partner. The world news also gives people investment chances over the world. Specifically, by reading newspapers, a foreign investor can catch the newest economic and political events of several countries to find out the best way to invest in a country.
In conclusion, people have to get updated every single day to keep up with the fast paced modern world. It is not a waste of time to read newspapers and watch television programs if people know how to apply it to support daily problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2734375 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97973911859 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66796875 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.798225161 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276313555258 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828322238269 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921647686566 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16476797829 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584174475909 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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