Some people think that the news media has become much more influential in people’s lives today and it is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree?
In the blooming era of the media, people from different ages all follow them. However, some people believe that media have only bad influence on human life. Personally, I totally disagree with this statement because these mainstream media channels have both positive and negative impacts on our daily life.
On the one hand, the news media channels is consider as a way to easily lead the audiences by the nose. For example, some unreliable online newspapers have a tendency to use dramatic title with a view to gain more viewers.
On the other hand, we can deny several advantages with which the media bring us. Firstly, media is an effective object to spread out the information, so people all around the world have equal chances to keep track of worldwide events. Moreover, with the help of media, citizens can easily expand their knowledge in multicultural aspects. For instance, were it not for the media's reach into every society in the world, "Stop Asian Hate" movement would never be so well known.
In conclusion, I believe that the merits of staying informed far outweigh any perceived drawbacks. People should take the time to find reliable news sources and vet the articles most pertinent to them.
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- Some people think that the news media has become much more influential in people s lives today and it is a negative development Do you agree or disagree 63
- Some people think that the news media has become much more influential in people s lives today and it is a negative development Do you agree or disagree 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99509803922 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52512842221 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691176470588 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1722391148 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.6363636364 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195678493712 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705079997631 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446763538195 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11081134667 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046390104009 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.