The ubiquity of media provides people with different news sources. Many people argued that the most optimal method to explore information is through the newspaper whereas I am of the opinion that they can make use of other means of social media to access information.
On the one hand, newspapers play an important role in receiving information. It is commonly acknowledged that newspapers still keep the most popular position among newsreaders owing to their reliability. As news published on press is often strictly censored by the government and administered by professional teams so that almost information is accurate; thereby, contributing to protecting readers from misleading information. Moreover, newspapers exist for a long time, before the advent of state-of-the-art technology thus it is suitable for senior citizens as they get familiar with the conventional way to learn news more than other modern media like the young.
On the other hand, there are variety of reasons why I believe that people nowadays should acquire news via different means of media. It is undeniable that social media such as television or internet websites are more convenient and interesting for people, especially younger ones. This is because the latest pieces of information from all over the world can update in a matter of minutes and spread to people immediately so that people can access a great deal of information anywhere, anytime. For instance, they can use their mobile phone to get updated even when travelling or hanging out with friends. Furthermore, social media also offer people a better reading experience. For example, many sports websites embedded videos or recordings so that sports fans enable to watch their favourite match with detailed and thoughtful analyses about it, which was a pleasurable experience.
In conclusion, while printed paper offers people a more reliable source of information, I am convinced that people can grasp useful knowledge in various fields via a variety of convenient platforms due to their superior to the conventional newspaper. However, I believe that with the diversity of ways to access news, more and more people will learn news to improve ânlysis skills and broaden their knowledge about the world surrounding.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 885, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it, which was a pleasurable experience. In conclusion, while printed paper offer...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34733893557 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9268907429 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.791618215 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.357142857 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284189050452 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952360633208 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744554894211 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183188825442 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417302947572 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 885, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it, which was a pleasurable experience. In conclusion, while printed paper offer...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34733893557 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9268907429 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.791618215 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.357142857 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284189050452 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952360633208 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744554894211 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183188825442 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417302947572 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.