Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better than through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, more and more people focus o enhancing their knowleadge about the world. Some people agree that the best way to learn news is reading newspapers,while the others make sure that we can gain information effectively if we use media instead.
On the one hand, newspapers have become one of the most important gadgets, which containing a huge information in all aspects of our life. It is not only our assistants, but also saving money. To explain for this, we can see through history. In the past, people used to learn news by reading books. But only a minority of community who have the ability to buy them. In order satisfy with the need of learning news in society, newspapers appeared.People just need to pay for a newspaper as they buy a bread toast. In conclusion, we can't deny the importance of newspapers until now.
On the other hand, other media, for example, TV, radio, computer are changing the way of people learning news. In the same way, these media also provide a massive information around the world, but their special advantage is that people don't need to wait for annual or monthly newspapers. As an example, instead of waiting for a newspaper, people will turn on the TV or a radio, so that they can learn news instantly. For this reason, it is undeniable that media are becoming one of our life.
Two ideas above have both described about the advantages of learning news through newspaper or media. Both of them are as important as the way they do. In my opinion, we can also learning news by newspaper or using other gadgets, no matter what it is.
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'learn'
Suggestion: learn
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68100358423 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64537011929 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541218637993 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0010956408 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.625 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389725059282 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129277509824 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109461604797 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264405250033 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775017362359 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.