Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
In recent years, the issue regarding which is the best way to learn news has aroused heated debates, while some individuals emphasizing that we can acquire knowledge from newspaper, I believe that other media be a better way to learn news.
On the one hand, newspaper has been a long-term way people choose to use for many years. Information via newspaper has to be accurate and exactly before they had been published and sold. Morover, people find newspaper is easier to use compared to other way such as using phone or laptop on account of the size of words via newspaper are bigger. Furthermore, learning through newspaper can help reader read deeply the information such as they can read slowly and will not be interrupted by any advertisemts like on mobile phone.
On the other hand, other media such as apps on the mobile phone or laptop is a better way to access the news. The news on the media will be updated everyday and we will not miss any important news. Moreover, we can bring phone with us outside and read news when we have free time. As a result, there will be a range of news we can learn through media because it is unlimited.
In conclusion, both newspaper and media has its advantages to some extent, media still provides us more benefits when learning news and it is used widely around the world because less and less newspaper has been published.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
.... The news on the media will be updated everyday and we will not miss any important news...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, regarding, so, still, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63524590164 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45820683395 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520491803279 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7416073089 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.1 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419779006887 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168298832567 0.084324248473 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962360968043 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262457463085 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771359353105 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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