Some people think that nowadays children have too much freedom Do you agree or disagree

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Some people think that nowadays children have too much freedom. Do you agree or disagree?

The world is changing at a fast pace and so are the rules and norms of the society. Presently, it is believed that today’s children enjoy much more independence than the children of the past. Here, I would like to accord with the given statement.

There are manifold points to support my view. First and foremost, parents these days realize that their off springs are capable of deciding things on their own. To illustrate, with the power of the television, internet and other technical gadgets in their hands, young generation today is most well informed than ever. Moreover, juveniles in the pa...

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... juveniles in the past were not exposed to much information and meekly did what th...
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Line 3, column 553, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...m. Adding to it, because of the boom in the IT sector, children grow up quicker than t...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...hildren the power to make decisions. Further emphasizing, another reason that childr...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04601226994 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7386110696 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570552147239 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0020409523 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3888888889 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14713322185 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478041970443 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548704388798 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938066589292 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00908322057155 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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