Some people think that parents have a powerful influence in a child’s life, while the influence from outside the home plays a bigger part in a child’s development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Educators have debated whether a child’s life is significantly affected by parents more than other aspects or not. From my perspective, parents are always have important effect toward their child and no one can get rid of the influence of parents and family.
Some people who are against this idea may argue that children will leave their home and live independently when they grow up. And therefore influence from outside the home such as stress from bosses or comflicts with classmates will affect an individuals’ attitude toward society and world. Even during childhood kids always was taught by teacher at school or spent time with their friends. It seems parents influence less than people who outside the home but the truth is not.
One idea that has received much attention is that the majority of children tend to obtain knowledge from their parents mainly because of its convenience and utility. Although, children are able to gain knowledge from their teachers or just by themselves, parents can teach the kids a number of life skills which useful in real life. Children observe their parents and imitate parents’ behaviour and in a long-term parents’ experience will become kids’ own advantages in this complicated society. For another, parents also tend to create a favorable environment for children. Some parents have enough power to help their kids overcome obtacles and be success. Overall, to give their next generation a better life, parents will always consider everything and thus their influence will larger than any other people in kids’ life.
In conclusion, I tend to believe parents have more influence to children than other factors and they always try their best to help their kids.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...From my perspective, parents are always have important effect toward their child and...
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Line 5, column 441, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a outside'.
Suggestion: who is a outside
...eems parents influence less than people who outside the home but the truth is not. On...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26785714286 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71200797287 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2955400572 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.461538462 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281214238039 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1135400807 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653075607731 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184303903911 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639386741382 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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