Some believe that to become a good person in a community, one should learn it from his or her parents while some consider it is the responsibility of the school. From my perspective, more responsibility for this is should be on parents instead of school. In this essay, we are going to see both the views.
Children are spending almost 18 hours in a day with parents and they are learning from them a lot of things. They act like their parents or guardians. The way they are living in the society children also used to adopt the same things. Parents are more responsible and important to teach their children as it is also a matter of their dignity. For instance, as per famous book ‘The search that seeks you’ written by Robin Sharma, he had mentioned about his life form his childhood wherein he had learned a lot from his mentor rather than school.
Responsibility of school is to give education of every aspect including their behavior towards society. Having said that, it is not the only thing to teach in school. The school anticipates the good behavior of their parents as well. In schools, children are getting the lessons towards their behavior but only lessons are not enough. Its practical need to the observer by their parents or mentors. So, the school also contributing in a little amount the development of child towards society. A report demonstrated that students who were taught in schools that how to be good and beneficial part of society were more kind and helpful towards others. Moreover, in the contemporary era, the trend of both parents working is alarmingly rising. When both of them are working, they do not give the required time to their offsprings. This shows that teachers should take the responsibility of students otherwise they would get spoiled.
In conclusion, although schools are teaching manners towards society, by considering the above-mentioned views, parents should look after children for guiding about the same.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: IS_SHOULD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...rspective, more responsibility for this is should be on parents instead of school....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96385542169 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73308811582 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521084337349 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.108636845 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7368421053 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4736842105 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94736842105 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275181665541 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863184297906 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489580862885 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177579412323 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602627456591 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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