some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Teaching children as the good members of society is considered as the one of parents’ missions while, others think that it is a schools’ duty. In my opinion, both parents and schools should contribute to teach juveniles to be prepared for society.
On the one hand, parents normally spend much time with their own children and also, they would be together in different situations. Given that, parents’ reactions and their behavior to people regarding their genders, ages, economic conditions and racial backgrounds could be the most effective lesson for children than any other source. Parents’ reactions could affect children’s predispositions about gender discrimination, respecting to older people and humiliating some certain racial groups. For instance, parents cannot expect their offspring to respect them as long as they do not treat their parents respectfully.
On the other hand, when children go to school, they would learn to communicate with their peers by trial and error. They accommodate their needs by negotiating and sometimes by yelling or fighting. with this in mind, school’s employees play an important role to encourage students to behave properly by punishing culprits who act inappropriately. for example, schools usually bestow some valuable gifts to outstanding students regarding their grades and reprimand students who are reported as not adjusted ones in order to push students to work harder and compete in the right way.
In conclusion, there should be a cooperation between parents and schools to teach children the acceptable behavior in society and get them prepared to be able to communicate efficiently with others.
- Computers are being used more and more in education Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion 73
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- telecommuting is growing in many countries and is expected to be common for most office workers in the coming decades how do you think society will be affected by the growth of telecommuting 73
- today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- as most people spend a major part of their adult life at work job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing What factors contribute to job satisfaction How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers 55
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49805447471 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95884144405 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607003891051 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5124181763 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.454545455 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285760555042 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117411241236 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898277917901 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201809387679 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109688331355 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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