some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Many folks feel that kids should be learnt being a useful person in public by their fathers and mothers while other take the view that, it is responsible of educational system. This essay agrees that children are more interested in following whose family patterns in life.
Children are often a contemporary version of their parents in behavior. Because, a great deal of time in childhood is spending at home where immediate members of family interact together so that it can be exactly copied and pasted adults interactions by kids when they are being out of house. Moreover, keepers generally have adequate time to give feedback what young teenagers performs for modification their acts to deal with others. For example, conducted a survey in Finland showed that for 76% of primary school boys, fathers are the first hero who are qualified for learning.
School have been made to teach knowledge and skills not to introduce the best behavior pattern. Certainly learning some science needs fully concentration and hence, it requires a place in which students can only focus on educational issues. Otherwise, they will not be able to learn as much as they should due to reduce attention. In other words, if students at school wanted to spend to time on how to respond in an appropriate way in public, when they could study? As a result, the applicable of school, which is defined to demonstrate academic fields, may be changed unfortunately.
In conclusion, this essay accepts that parents are more deserve to show positive trends of living to children than schools. Because, kids are much more attracted to repeat completely whatever their parents perform, while school has been established for only scientific aims.
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- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 78
- some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to be'.
Suggestion: to be
...y folks feel that kids should be learnt being a useful person in public by their fath...
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Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an appropriate way" with adverb for "appropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nted to spend to time on how to respond in an appropriate way in public, when they could study? As a ...
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Line 4, column 275, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n established for only scientific aims.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08833922261 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67165384558 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628975265018 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2551384954 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.769230769 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193095747198 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628207450425 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0190348354084 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107026023741 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222538729 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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