Some people think paying taxes is big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes.
People think that paying taxes is a large contribution to society. While different feel that citizens most responsibility, than just paying taxes
There are various reasons why it is quite enough. Firstly paying taxes is good to government and to people, because government paying wage who work for government. Secondly government gives a free study eleven years and gives who low-income, government tries exchange schools, kindergartens, business centers, hospitals. Taxes are the life source of a nation, in order to keep the nation. And tax is essential to help give us safe.
Despite these arguments, I think governments do not look in our pocket. In my opinion, people are responsibility for safe historical places and old buildings. So, it may be serve to our nationality, inheritance and culture. As a result, percentage of tourist gets only increase its good for developing our country. Another responsibility is to educate to high result the wealthy members of the future society. Because this is the key for been successful in future.
In conclusion, I am confirmed that paying taxes is the best to way for developing to society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, while, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 185.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18918918919 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04476463339 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643243243243 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5325512591 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8461538462 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2307692308 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277529203415 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979511347584 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111200904941 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187401756682 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128601719586 0.056905535591 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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